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Xeta Enraged (My OC) by XetaJTS Xeta Enraged (My OC) by XetaJTS
Here is something i am really proud of, I love the effect i gave him with the energy, I hope you all enjoy!

Link To story: Project X Chapter 1 Night of Tragedy 

Character Bio:

Name: Xeta Shidel.

Species: Pokemon, Lucario. Previously Human.

Backstory: After tragedy and pain befell him in a single night, Xeta has found himself alone, homeless, and his body unrecognizable. After adjusting to this body he tries to live his new life in secret. He uses his abilities to make himself seem like his original form with a few alterations. First off is his clothing is different. He wears this cloak so that it is easier for him to hold the disguise, less of his body seen the less he has to hide. Second he has made himself appear with a scar across his neck. He can no longer speak in human tongue so he uses the scar as an excuse as to why he can't speak. But one things he can't hide no matter how hard he tries is his eyes. The disguise does not work on his eyes so they always show as his feral, animalistic red eyes. He also cannot fool mirrors so he avoids them at all costs, or puts his hood up to keep people from seeing it. He tries to still live his life and finish high school as someone "normal"

Abilities: With his new body he has found new strength and agility. He is not immortal but is still able to put a dent in a tree if need be. He has learned new abilities from the change. He has aura vision which lets him see the life force of living creatures, even through walls. He can infuse his paw with a bright light that sends a powerful shockwave at close range. He can infuse the claws on his wrist with the power of shadow. He can form a bone staff made from the blue energy he controls called Aura, and he has learned to change his tail into a strong iron. He was taught by his father in martial arts and displays them more than he ever could before. He also will carry his sword when he hunts, it was given to him by his family as a gift since he was a loving collector of weapons. Never had any use for them before now. His new agility makes him quicker and sometimes impossible to see if he tries his hardest.
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Ok, so I haven't done a proper critique in some time, so let's hope I do it right.

Vision- The piece overall is pleasing to the eyes, the concept being well thought-out and stays true to the character. The shading around the eyes also help show Xeta's pissed.

Originality- It's not common for art like this to come around, or art of Lucario with their sensors up, so kudos for that!

Technique- Like I said before, the shading really help show the anger expressed, and I like the fur you did by the eyes. Also, I like how you kept Xeta at the original Pokemon art style, though that's just my preference. ^^;

Impact- In conclusion, the piece is well done and thought out. You can really feel the anger emanating from the pic. Wish to see more of your work bud. Great job!
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I'd say that this piece is pretty good. I don't think that an original character can be a preexisting Pokemon, but nevertheless I like what you did with the, "aura," surrounding the Pokemon. It would be cool to see this same image as a png without the aura and with some legs, but it's still fine as you made it. From what you wrote about your character, I can tell that you put plenty of work into who this is and their reasons for existing, which I respect. It's also a nice touch with the date in the top-left, that's a good documentation strategy.
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JulieKao Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Xeta, eat a snickers. you turn into a  raging demon when you're hungry"
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XetaJTS Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I feel the same pokemon gif lucario 
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MoonMan246 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Student Digital Artist
ARE YOU KIDDING ME. WHAT IS WITH YOU MAKING SUCH GREAT ART IN A DAY. 
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XetaJTS Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Idk, the app is very handy! Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (PMD) - Lucario (happy) 
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HazelGatoya Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Oh dear. 0_o Something set someone off. This looks amazing!
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XetaJTS Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I will probably use this as the cover for when he does go off on someone! Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (PMD) - Lucario (happy) 
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HazelGatoya Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
:la: :iconbegplz: :w00t:
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XetaJTS Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
It will be great! I promise. Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (PMD) - Lucario (happy) 
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HazelGatoya Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Oh, I'm sure!
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jwwt4 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
cool neat
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XetaJTS Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (PMD) - Lucario (happy) 
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jwwt4 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
your welcome ^w^
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UnversedLupine Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks amazing!
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XetaJTS Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (PMD) - Lucario (happy) 
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UnversedLupine Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
No prob
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MamoswineDraws Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
I too love the purple energy surrounding him! :)
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XetaJTS Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (PMD) - Lucario (happy) 
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