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Project X Chapter 3 Unrecognized
Later that night after seeing the message that Xeta had left for me I decided it was time for me to go to bed. I had to get up at five so I could catch my bus, so to make sure I was not tired I made sure to go to bed early. Once I had fallen asleep I had a dream.
 
I opened my eyes looking up at the sky. Once I sat up I saw I was in a field of violets. I took my time standing up and saw that I was in a white dress. I took a look around at my surroundings and saw in all directions were more of these flowers. I kept looking back and forth, nothing but the Violets. I then looked up at the sky and it was cloudy, but the sun still shined through them. I decided I would walk until I got somewhere. I kept walking for hours. Even though I wasn’t tired I was sick of walking. I decided to just sit in the flowers and rest. I sat there thinking to myself about what all of this meant until something tapped my shoulder.
 
When I looked back I saw Xeta! But he was different. He was we
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Pokemon Revival Chapter 34 Bushido
(Years ago, Gareth POV)
 
-NO, NO, NO WHY!?- I screamed running away from the Zangoose that was chasing me. I had taken some berries from this bush and apparently they were his and since I ate one I had to pay.
 
-GET BACK HERE YOU STUPID KIRLIA! DON’T THINK YOU CAN GET AWAY!- The Zangoose screamed. I didn’t even have the berries anymore and he was still chasing me. As he said I was a Kirlia, short, frail, and easily maul-able.
 
I kept running away but he caught up quick and slashed one of my legs with his claw, it was really bad and I couldn’t get back up. He stepped over to me with his claws I the air. He was moving them menacingly.
 
-End of the line kid!- He swung he claw up and tried to swing it down but got stopped. A bunch of sharp leaves flew by and started knocking him back. Then from another bush a black and silver Pokémon came out and slashed him with his arm claws. Then from behind him a blue Pokémon came out of nowhere and s
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Project X Chapter 2 Silent
(Elizabeth POV)
 
After waiting a little while in the lunch the bell finally rung to tell everyone to head to first period. I took my time walking. I was thinking about Xeta, what did he go through, that question kept ringing through my head. I just saw him days ago, smiling, happy! What happened?
 
When I made it to my first period he was there. Unlike where he would look at the door for me to come if he got there early he just sat there looking at the desk. I took my time walking over to my desk which was right next to his. When I did sit down he didn’t even realize. I had to tap his shoulder to even get his attention. His new, red eyes opened wide and the slits thinned to looking like just a line. I was positive now, contacts are great and all but they did not do what those just did. He finally took notice of me and just stared at me. While he did I couldn’t help but look at the scar on his neck. It really got healed, it looked like when he had it made it had f
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Project X Chapter 1 Night of Tragedy
“Xeta.” Uh. Who could that be? Five more minutes.
 
“Xeta!” Whoever this is really is annoying.
 
“I said five more minutes!” I complained.
 
“XETA!” With that I got woken from my slumber, I was sitting in a desk, at school…. Ah crap. I looked up and saw my teacher Mrs. Leonhart looking down at me. She had dark brown hair, glasses, and blue eyes. She wore blue jeans and a white shirt in a very fashionable way.
 
“Want to explain what you were doing Mr. Shidel?” She asked me. I guess I must have passed out during her class, it wasn’t really my fault, I stayed up late because of a test I was really stressed out about.
 
“S-sorry Mrs. Leonhart, I had a rough night last night, didn’t get much sleep. I promise it won’t happen again!” I pledged.
 
“Well… I believe you, it isn’t like you to just fall asleep like that, you even have bags unde
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Pokemon Revival Chapter 33 Reunions
It was early morning when I woke up because of Martin coming to get me from my room. I got frustrated at first but then when I realized why I got woken up my mood changed. I was so excited to get to go be a part of the team there. After finishing breakfast and telling everyone bye we headed out to the police station. The ride was nothing special pretty much the same as last time. Once we got to the police stations it was far less packed than it was yesterday. I was very much relieved because I did not want to deal with a mad house. Martin told me to follow him and in which I did. Once we got to his office I saw that Mirai was sitting in one of the chairs.
 
Martin sat in his chair and started to speak, “I know you have already met her but I would like you to meet your commanding officer Mirai Bernidel, she will give you all instructions on what you will be doing on your team and how you will do it, also she is who will decide what place you get on the squad.”
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Pokemon Revival Chapter 32 Much Needed Info
(Jon POV, Morning.)
 
I had seen Jae off when he left to join the police. I was actually happy for him, he had always wanted to always be a part of the criminal justice system and was finally getting his chance. I hope it goes well, I wouldn’t even want to imagine how disappointed he would be if he didn’t get in, but since the test Martin described sounded easy it seemed like it would go well.
 
So here I was pretty much alone, Riley had gone over to a friend's house, I can’t play video games yet, Lucario said a friend got Martin to call them to where they live and Claire was working in the garden. That left me with only one option to hang out with someone, Carol. Don’t get me wrong she is nice but I just couldn’t see us playing anything besides dollhouse. But I decided I would go for it anyway. I walked up the stairs to her room and clawed at it as my form of knocking. I heard her walk up to the door and open it.
 
She noticed me,
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Pokemon Revival Chapter 31 Initiation
The day after it was time for me to go take my initiation test. I was in the car with Martin and we were on our way to the police station. I told everyone bye and my brother and Lucario wished me good luck before we left. Martin explained there were two steps to the Initiation. There was an I.Q. Test and a Physical test. The I.Q. test was basically just to test how smart the Pokémon was, pretty much just to test if they can follow orders and do them properly. Then the physical test was something different. You go through exercises that test your strengths, how well you can swim, run jump, the basics. There was a second part to the physical test as Martin described. The second part was where we would have to choose your opponent from the Pokémon that were already on the force and see how we could handle them. That was what I was waiting for.
 
We kept driving until we got to the station, this was my first time here and it was impressive. A two-story building that had a be
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Draconic - Chapter 1
It is quite a beautiful day, I muse, strolling forwards on the gravelly road beneath me, a metallic can of gasoline held in my right hand. The sun is shining, the air is that perfect temperature where it is neither too hot nor too cold, and there is even a bit of birdsong coming from the lush greenery off in the distance. A few fluffy, white clouds adorn the skies, but it's nothing that would cause any sort of unpleasant downfall, really. The rather unremarkable gravel beneath my feet crunches as I walk, continuously letting its presence be known. There's the occasional bigger piece, and there was that one time when most of the path had gotten obstructed by some sort of large, grey boulder, but in general the road seems to be in good condition, if a bit uncared for as of late.
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A Sneasel's Tale | Chapter 2 | Renegade and Boxes
WARNING: VIOLENCE AND DESCRIPTION OF ABUSE.
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I had no idea where I was when I woke up from my drug nap. I was still cold, and curled up. It was a bit hard to see in the box I was in, but I went up to the bars and tested their strength with my good arm. No luck. Most of the other Pokémon around me were sleeping, and there where a few more as I scanned the area. We must of gone south from my territory, because there was a few bunearies huddled together, which don’t normally stay near my territory during this time of the year. There were also some Burmy, Shinx, and Aipom. Then, in a dark corner, a box to the left of mine, a Pokémon I would soon learn to be an Octillery. It had noticed I woke up, then chuckled.
‘You really don’t know where you are, huh?” It spoke. I guessed it was a male, with its deeper voice. He pull
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Alright it is here! Chapter 3 of Project X.

It seems that it will be a week time frame between my two stories but i will still make good and quality work! Anyway i hope you enjoy the new chapter and see you all later!Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (PMD) - Lucario (happy) 
Later that night after seeing the message that Xeta had left for me I decided it was time for me to go to bed. I had to get up at five so I could catch my bus, so to make sure I was not tired I made sure to go to bed early. Once I had fallen asleep I had a dream.
 
I opened my eyes looking up at the sky. Once I sat up I saw I was in a field of violets. I took my time standing up and saw that I was in a white dress. I took a look around at my surroundings and saw in all directions were more of these flowers. I kept looking back and forth, nothing but the Violets. I then looked up at the sky and it was cloudy, but the sun still shined through them. I decided I would walk until I got somewhere. I kept walking for hours. Even though I wasn’t tired I was sick of walking. I decided to just sit in the flowers and rest. I sat there thinking to myself about what all of this meant until something tapped my shoulder.
 
When I looked back I saw Xeta! But he was different. He was wearing a simple black t-shirt and blue jeans. The scar on his neck was gone and his eyes were the normal bright blue!
 
“Looks like I found you!” He said.
 
“XETA!? You are here?” I asked.
 
“Yeah!” He said.
 
“But your eyes!? And your scar!? What happened to them?” I asked.
 
“What are you talking about? I thought you said we would meet out here remember?” He asked.
 
“Wait! D-did I?” I asked myself.
 
“Yeah! I thought you would remember!? Here I brought us lunch,” He then put down the basket he had and laid out the blanket for us to lay down on. At this point I thought the thing was real, and I was happy! So I sat down with him on the blanket and started to enjoy the sandwiches and snacks he had brought with him. It was so great to hear his voice! I thought it was gone forever and I would never be able to hear it again. We just spent the time talking to each other, enjoying the others company. But after a while of talking his expression grew somber.
 
I did take notice of the change, “What is wrong?” I asked.
 
He looked at me with his blue eyes, then he closed them, “Elizabeth, I am out of time,” He said sadly. He then stood up from the picnic and the blanket and food disappeared. The wind started to pick up too.
 
I sat myself up on my knees, “What do you mean?” I asked.
 
“You were my best friend Elizabeth… no, you were more than that, you were my life…. You were everything I ever wanted, and now…… that fate is not possible” His eyes were still closed when he said this. I got surprised he had said what he did but I had to make sure.
 
“Wait! What do you mean I was more?!” I asked scared. The wind around us started to pick up even more than before.
 
“Just as I said, from what has happened, that fate is no longer possible, or even plausible, and I need you to hear this, because if this is the last time you see me, I want you to know I mean every word I am saying here.” He kept his eyes shut tightly.
 
“What!? Xeta…. I feel the same, I always have! I always wanted to be with you! You were the one I wanted, all of my friends knew and would always keep the secret from you, because I asked them! I wanted them to let me be the one to tell you! So I want us to be together! I want to live my life with you!” I exclaimed while I held his hand.
 
His eyes widened to complete shock when I said that. But I realized his eyes were back to the bright crimson!
 
He started to cry, “I am glad to hear you say that but….,” All of the sudden I started getting lifted into the air. The wind started carrying me away as I held on to his hand. He wasn’t getting lifted into the air but stayed on the ground. The sky started turning black and the flowers started fading away.
 
“Don’t let go!” I screamed!
 
“I am sorry….,” His let his grip go and I started floating away. I tried struggling and reaching out to him, trying to push myself back to him. But as I did I noticed his clothing change to the black overcoat with blue trim appear on him. He also had the scar he wore on his neck now.
 
“XETA!” I screamed.
 
As he watched he reached for a flower, picked it up, and pushed it towards me.
 
“Farewell,” He said. As it flew I saw the flower fall apart and inside was….. Oh my god!
 
It was the golden cross necklace that he used to wear. He would not take it to school because he is scared of it being stolen. It was apparently his family passed down piece. His grandfather wore it, then his father, then him. I reached out for it and took it in my hands. Then I looked back at him and saw him walking into the darkness.
 
“Xeta!” I called. He kept walking away.
 
“XETA!” I screamed. He kept walking.
 
“XET-“ I was about to call again but before he entered the darkness I saw his body change. His head and body morphed to that of a canine, and he had a tail. I couldn’t see details but I could see the shadow. Then the wind pulled me higher and higher away until.
 
“XETA!” I screamed after sitting up in my bed. I took a look around and saw I was in my room. So it was a dream. I took a huge breath of relief knowing that it wasn’t real. That was a nightmare, I would never want to say goodbye like that. But the as I moved something jingled around my neck. I looked down at my chest and saw the golden cross necklace….
 
“What?” I audibly asked. How did that? Who? Why was it here? I did not have it, and I shouldn’t even have it, if anything Xeta should have it on him! How did I have it? I decided to keep wearing it and get ready to go to school. I got dressed, got my hair made, ate breakfast, and brushed my teeth before heading out the door. While I rode the bus I kept staring down at the necklace I had. I examined it and saw the name Shidel engraved on it. That was definitely his necklace, no way it wasn’t. Once the bus finally pulled up to the stop I walked out and went to the lunch room where I always waited. I was clutching my chest in agony. That dream was too real, and I got scared that it would come true. My right hand clenched my chest as my left held the necklace. Thankfully a wave of relief came over me as I saw him enter the lunchroom. I was so relieved I audibly gasped. He noticed me and came over to where I was sitting and sat down. My dream made me thought he would speak but to my expectations he didn’t.
 
He gave me a confused look as to ask what was wrong. Thankfully I replied, “Oh sorry, just a nightmare got me scared, sorry,” I said.
 
He nodded in agreement. But then I remembered, “OH WAIT!” He seemed shocked to my outburst but even more so when I pulled the necklace from around my neck and held it up to him.
 
“Here, I don’t know how but I woke up with it on my neck, I want to give it back,”  He seemed to shake his head and push it towards me, “No Xeta, this is not mine, this is yours, somehow this survived the fire and ended up with me, I don’t know how but it was fate, you need it, it is so you can remember your family!” I said seriously. He seemed to tear up but he seemed to give in and take it from me and put it on. He then gave me a small smile.
 
“You know, you look better with it on! Keep it that way!” I said happily. I saw him get shocked and I saw his mood get better dramatically. He got out the pen and paper and we just talked until time to head to first period. We continued to talk in that class too. I wish I could hear his voice again, it wasn’t fair that he couldn’t speak and I couldn’t hear him, it just wasn’t fair. After first period we were heading to our next class but we had to go to the outside area to get to it. We were walking when someone blocked us.
 
“So… You are that kid who can’t speak,” The guy in front of us said. He was tall and I think I had seen him before on the football team.
 
“What do you want?” I asked.
 
“See this kid had stolen my thunder, everybody feels sorry for you because you lost your worthless parents, I am sick of it, and now I am going to make you pay!” He said.
 
I was going to say something but I got cut off, “GRRR…….,” I looked over at Xeta and heard him making a growling sound. But the craziest thing was his eyes, they were actually growing.
 
“OH! You think you are some hotshot huh? Well you don’t have a chance!” He charged and I backed up scared. The guy threw a punch but Xeta caught it in his hand. The jock and I were both surprised. He tried to throw another punch but Xeta caught it as well. The guy tried to get away but Xeta had a firm grip and he wouldn’t let go. Then with a loud crack the guy screamed. His hand got bent over his wrist. I was actually terrified at what I just saw. It wasn’t the fact that Xeta broke the guys hand, it wasn’t the fact of how horrific the sound it made was. No, it was the look in Xeta’s eyes, not only was it showing anger and hate, but the main thing it showed was control, his eyes were in slits and they were unfazed, like he wasn’t even shocked at what he just did. Then the last thing about his eyes was the way they moved, instead of looking back at me or looking at the crowd that had gathered, he was just focused on the guy. No, even then it wasn’t that he was focusing on the guy, it was like he was forced to focus on him. But a second of screaming and waiting later his eyes calmed in their expression and stopped glowing.
 
A teacher had come up to the scene, “WHAT IS THE MEANING OF THIS!?” He screamed.
 
The jock on the ground ran to him in fear, “THAT KID IS A MONSTER, HE BROKE MY HAND!” The teacher took a look at his hand and saw that it got bent backwards over his wrist!
 
“YOU LITTLE YOU ARE COMING WITH ME!” The teacher yelled at Xeta. But I stood between them.
 
“YOUNG LADY MOVE THIS INSTANT!” He yelled at me.
 
“NO! That idiot behind you started a fight with Xeta, just because he said he was jealous of him getting attention, AFTER HIS FAMILY WAS KILLED! HE HAS BEEN THROUGH ENOUGH AND HE WANTS TO COME OVER HERE AND DO THAT, WELL I AM SORRY IF YOU PUNISH XETA YOU WILL PUNISH ME TOO!” I screamed.
 
He turned around to look at the jock, “Is this true!?”
 
“NO! She is lying! Everyone saw what happened!” He screamed.
 
Then a guy came out from the crowd, “Yeah what is saw was you picking a fight with someone who went through hell and you thinking you wouldn’t get repercussions for it!” I looked over to see Xeta’s friend Bruce. We don’t talk much but I have met him before and know who he is.
 
“I saw it sir, this guy here provoked him and tried to attack, in his defense Xeta probably did the best way to subdue someone with minimal damage, so how about you punish the person who actually deserves it instead of causing a court case.
 
The teacher looked toward the jock in anger, “You are coming with me, not only will you be charged with assault but also for provoking the fight!” He then dragged the jock off without another word.
 
Xeta came up to me and Bruce and gave us both a nod, “I guess that was a thank you, don’t mention it! I will always be here to help you out man, especially if it comes to speaking!” Bruce said.
 
“Thanks Bruce that was a big help,” I said.
 
“Again it is no problem, let us get to class before we get in extra trouble,” I went to my next class with Xeta and it was our same routine that we had done. After that we had met up for lunch again but Xeta has a different meal this time. He had a plastic bag filled with what looked like jerky and grilled meat.
 
“Uh…. What is up with the food?” I asked. He then wrote down on a piece of paper that he had bought grilled food and jerky at his new home. He got a lot of money from his life insurance so he was having to use that as food. He said he would try to get a job soon but he wanted to wait a little while which was understandable. After lunch I headed to the rest of my classes. I didn’t see him for the rest of the day since of course we shared no classes after lunch.
 
At the end of the day I was heading to the car ramp to get picked up when I noticed Xeta. He was walking towards one of the large forests this town had. Didn’t he ride the bus? Why was he walking, if he did get a new house he definitely would not be going in that direction. There is no houses for miles past those woods, so why was he going there?
 
I started walking in the direction and pulled out my phone to call my mom. Once she finally picked up I told her I was heading to a friend's house. She was a little pissed because she was already there to pick me up but she gave I and agreed. I put my phone up and picked up pace. As he I followed I noticed the same thing happen again. His stature got shorter and so did his coat. He started going a lot faster in the forest and it was hard to keep up. Thankfully I don’t think he noticed me. He was so fast that I lost track of him. About ten minutes later I was about to give up and start walking home.
 
Before I could though there was a rustling in the forest. I held perfectly still and held my breath. I was scared for my life, that could have been anything! I waited and waited and waited. THEN!
 
Out of one of the thick bushes walked out a deer. It’s tan fur and long horns standing proudly, it was a buck. I audibly gasped because it wasn’t a predator and I was glad for that. He seemed to notice me but went on to eating some grass. This was my first time seeing a deer this close so I was actually very giddy and excited.
 
But it all turned to travesty. With growling type scream a wolf would make something pounced the deer. A noticeable stabbing sound rang through the air and the buck started screaming. It terrified me. That wasn’t just an animal attacking the deer, it was Xeta! He had his hood over him and he had stabbed the deer with a sword. The sword seemed familiar to the one he showed me at his house one time. I thought maybe I was seeing things but from around his neck fell the same golden cross necklace I returned to him. It kept dangling as he kept removing and stabbing the sword back into the deer. All the while the deer kept screaming, that scream was something I would never forget, it was such a horrible scream that petrified me. Then with one finishing blow it was over. The deer stopped screaming and stopped moving. Xeta got covered in blood and so was his jacket. The grass and dirt was stained red from the innocent deer’s blood. It was a grueling scene, something that you would see a pack of wolves do to an animal.
 
Xeta started to look up but before he could I hide behind the tree that was next to me. Was that really Xeta? Why would he do that, and how could he do that, I didn’t see him! Did he see me? It doesn’t matter, I he was terrifying, was this what the dream meant!? Not that I would never see Xeta again! But I would never know the same Xeta again, was that it!?
 
I heard rustling and took a look around the corner of the tree. He was walking away with the corpse of the deer. I took this as my chance to get out of this forest and away from him. I don’t know what that was but I am never coming back here!
 
I could have sworn I saw him notice me but he kept walking, guess it was just my imagination. I decided that was all a mirage and the forest was messing with my head. I would have to walk home now since my mom told me she wouldn’t pick me up. Guess it will be a long trip home then.
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Took a while but it sems that it will be about a week between chapters since i have two stories now. But hey spring break is coming up and that will give me plenty of time to write! I hope you all enjoy this new chapter and see you all in the next one!Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (PMD) - Lucario (happy) 

Previous:Project X Chapter 2 Silent 
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Something i did and have been wanting to do, hope you like it!Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (PMD) - Lucario (happy) 
Xeta Enraged (My OC)
Here is something i am really proud of, I love the effect i gave him with the energy, I hope you all enjoy!

Link To story: Project X Chapter 1 Night of Tragedy 

Character Bio:

Name: Xeta Shidel.

Species: Pokemon, Lucario. Previously Human.

Backstory: After tragedy and pain befell him in a single night, Xeta has found himself alone, homeless, and his body unrecognizable. After adjusting to this body he tries to live his new life in secret. He uses his abilities to make himself seem like his original form with a few alterations. First off is his clothing is different. He wears this cloak so that it is easier for him to hold the disguise, less of his body seen the less he has to hide. Second he has made himself appear with a scar across his neck. He can no longer speak in human tongue so he uses the scar as an excuse as to why he can't speak. But one things he can't hide no matter how hard he tries is his eyes. The disguise does not work on his eyes so they always show as his feral, animalistic red eyes. He also cannot fool mirrors so he avoids them at all costs, or puts his hood up to keep people from seeing it. He tries to still live his life and finish high school as someone "normal"

Abilities: With his new body he has found new strength and agility. He is not immortal but is still able to put a dent in a tree if need be. He has learned new abilities from the change. He has aura vision which lets him see the life force of living creatures, even through walls. He can infuse his paw with a bright light that sends a powerful shockwave at close range. He can infuse the claws on his wrist with the power of shadow. He can form a bone staff made from the blue energy he controls called Aura, and he has learned to change his tail into a strong iron. He was taught by his father in martial arts and displays them more than he ever could before. He also will carry his sword when he hunts, it was given to him by his family as a gift since he was a loving collector of weapons. Never had any use for them before now. His new agility makes him quicker and sometimes impossible to see if he tries his hardest.
Xeta Enraged (My OC)
Here is something i am really proud of, I love the effect i gave him with the energy, I hope you all enjoy!

Link To story: Project X Chapter 1 Night of Tragedy 

Character Bio:

Name: Xeta Shidel.

Species: Pokemon, Lucario. Previously Human.

Backstory: After tragedy and pain befell him in a single night, Xeta has found himself alone, homeless, and his body unrecognizable. After adjusting to this body he tries to live his new life in secret. He uses his abilities to make himself seem like his original form with a few alterations. First off is his clothing is different. He wears this cloak so that it is easier for him to hold the disguise, less of his body seen the less he has to hide. Second he has made himself appear with a scar across his neck. He can no longer speak in human tongue so he uses the scar as an excuse as to why he can't speak. But one things he can't hide no matter how hard he tries is his eyes. The disguise does not work on his eyes so they always show as his feral, animalistic red eyes. He also cannot fool mirrors so he avoids them at all costs, or puts his hood up to keep people from seeing it. He tries to still live his life and finish high school as someone "normal"

Abilities: With his new body he has found new strength and agility. He is not immortal but is still able to put a dent in a tree if need be. He has learned new abilities from the change. He has aura vision which lets him see the life force of living creatures, even through walls. He can infuse his paw with a bright light that sends a powerful shockwave at close range. He can infuse the claws on his wrist with the power of shadow. He can form a bone staff made from the blue energy he controls called Aura, and he has learned to change his tail into a strong iron. He was taught by his father in martial arts and displays them more than he ever could before. He also will carry his sword when he hunts, it was given to him by his family as a gift since he was a loving collector of weapons. Never had any use for them before now. His new agility makes him quicker and sometimes impossible to see if he tries his hardest.
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As i said before i love this piece but i want to give a fair critique. The originality, vision and impact are great! Instead of going with a normal Lucario you made it your own and gave him a sense of self. Love the detail with the tail and ears, actually makes it look like it has fur. Even going as so far into detail that he puts his paws in his pockets. The real downside i can see is the coloring, i won't judge to hard since this is not digital but it could use a cleaner coloring, i would go with color pencils instead of crayon. Pencils seem to be a more fair way of drawing and helps keep the picture looking real. The hair is a little hard to notice but is still there, but i would advise next time using color pencils or pens so that you can make better strokes and coloring, any way you still did a fantastic job and i can't wait to see more from you!
Sorry to put this out there it's just, where is everyone at.Looking Up 

I usually see comments show up from a couple of you out there but i haven't heard from anyone except for Ina. So really i just want to make sure everyone is all right and kicking. Just let me know, really i just want to make sure everyone is doing okay and nothing bad has happened.Looking Down 

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I am a new writer on DeviantArt. I have been here for a little while now, a couple of months and have been an active writer and artist. My skills are improving as i move along, and i hopefully will get professional. If you have any questions please don't be afraid to ask.
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So i have been thinking, I have other ideas for stories I want to do. I have three of them. I want to know which one you guys think I should do. I want to know which one you think would be a better idea to do STORY DESCRIPTIONS ARE IN COMMENTS 

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3 deviants said Project X(Story featuring Xeta)
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2 deviants said The Protector
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1 deviant said A reason to live(Character will possibly be named Xeta.)

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roxaspwnsxion Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Student Digital Artist
appreciate the llama :3 
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XetaJTS Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (PMD) - Lucario (happy) Your welcome.
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UnversedLupine Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Hello.
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XetaJTS Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Hi! Thanks for the compliment on the Oc and the story! Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (PMD) - Lucario (happy) 
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UnversedLupine Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
No prob! I was hoping I can befriend you!
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XetaJTS Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Sure! I like talking to the people on here! Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (PMD) - Lucario (happy) 

The only problem is that the time you commented i was at school. Just got off the bus about ten minutes ago.
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LordOrenamus Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017
Hello, thank you for the watch ! I hope you'll enjoy my next deviations :)
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XetaJTS Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
You got it! Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (PMD) - Lucario (happy) 
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Popokko Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
hello! nice to see a fellow writer :'D though honestly I have written proper short stories in years ; u ;
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XetaJTS Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Good to meet you too! Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (PMD) - Lucario (happy) 
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